format. At the same time, I need you to review this dissertation done by
previous expert and what is the problem of this dissertation. I need this literature review to tie together with the dissertation topic that I choose as well as the research questions. I need expert to give comments on this dissertation and why the university professor said that the dissertation is badly done, not in dissertation format, quantitative research and finding is bad.
Below are the comments by Professor today:
Dear
Student,
I’ve
received your emails but you are still not addressing the basic issues of the
dissertation process:
·
Your research questions;
·
The literature review;
·
Your methodology;
·
Your data collection;
·
Your conclusion;
·
Your references.
You
are trying to justify the reliability and validity of your work but I don’t
think the University would buy that.
Professor





