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Show transcribed image text Guilherme Faria da Costa Hello! My name is Guilerme, l'm ready to hit the ground running. I'm a top performing sales professional with enthusiastic and energy to spare. I love people in fact, getting to know new people is one of my favorite thing to do. My natural ability to build relationship with people has been part of what makes me a great sells representative. Perhaps I should let my numbers speak for themself: $227,000 That's the amount of business l generate during my first season of employment with Pagliacci Pest Control. $385.000 That's the amount l generated during my second season. 1 That was my rank out of 80 Pagliacci sales representatatives. 25% That percentage represents the amount l consistantly exceded sales goals while working as a sales rep for Pagliacci. What can I sell for you? Please check out my ePortfolio to learn more about my accomplishments, goals and interests. Thanks for stopping by!
Guilherme Faria da Costa Hello! My name is Guilerme, l'm ready to hit the ground running. I'm a top performing sales professional with enthusiastic and energy to spare. I love people in fact, getting to know new people is one of my favorite thing to do. My natural ability to build relationship with people has been part of what makes me a great sells representative. Perhaps I should let my numbers speak for themself: $227,000 That's the amount of business l generate during my first season of employment with Pagliacci Pest Control. $385.000 That's the amount l generated during my second season. 1 That was my rank out of 80 Pagliacci sales representatatives. 25% That percentage represents the amount l consistantly exceded sales goals while working as a sales rep for Pagliacci. What can I sell for you? Please check out my ePortfolio to learn more about my accomplishments, goals and interests. Thanks for stopping by!





